IELTS Task1 Band 7.0 Model Essay7模範解答 ーWritten by Sayaー
課題
最近、Task2が多かったので、今日はTask1を掲載いたしますね。
ただし・・・、この写真は先生のご指導の跡が残っている写真ですので、あまり綺麗ではありません。
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The bar graph shows the statistics of daily fast food consumption for men and women in four age categories in 2015.
According to the graph, men at the youngest age group between 18 and 34, had the highest fast food consumption at 17%. However, the percentage significantly dropped until the eldest age group, 65 (+), reached the lowest at 5%. From the highest point, there was a large drop in size by 6% to age 35-49 age group. While age 35-49 and 50-64 age groups had a similar rate, the drop between age 50-64 and over 65 was significant at 4%.
Similarly, women had a descending order based on their age, however, the percentages were nearly 1% less than their male counterparts. The youngest female age group consumed fast food the most at 16% of daily calories while the eldest group had just a quarter of the youngest people’s
In conclusion, this essay has analyzed that younger people eat more fast food than older people. This trend is equally shown among both genders, but female consumption was slightly less than males.
(192 words)
終わりに
このエッセーは、私が取り組んだエッセーの中でも、よく書けた方かな？と思います。
（自画自賛みたいな感じですが汗）
このエッセーの中で、ぜひ皆さんにも使っていただきたい単語には赤マーカーをつけておきましたので、それを使って、早速文章を作って見てくださいね♪
